I read Aditya’s response, and his main point were appealing to the audience. His points and mine were similar because we both focused on the purpose of the writing. Knowing your audience and use their way of thinking to write the essay will make the argument more effective. Aditya also had another point which is different than mine, he chose choose a specific style for your paper. I agreed on his point because a good structure will help the readers not get lost in the words. In addition, he also added having a strong introduction and conclusion. This I also found helpful because a good start draws audience’s attention and a good ending adds a completeness to the story. These are something that I can learn from his response.